At First Sight Poem by Moushumi moushumi

At First Sight

Rating: 5.0


Here meets the blind date with her
A stumble upon at the crossroad near

Slowly deepens the meeting of hearts
And souls throb silently apart

Eyes struck one to one with touch
As one is void of look a far

And the best moment enchants
The eyes, the hearts and all over

‘Not to give up’ vowed the time
‘Not to renew the old love line’

Blind date today sees through…
As science made him so;

But the images make him cry
What’s real and what’s a lie.

Endless sea and the night horizon
Reveals the eternity to his beckon

And life slides onto this
Everyday with every new trice

Blind date starts words-session
Ingrains diction to be done
One by one…

All the gestures, we make
All the movements, we preserve
One by one…

In a flash,

One moment blew his present
A black-out shadow went past
And the blindness attained dark
A sweet phase faded at last.

04/04/09

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 23 June 2009

compact beautiful composition! 10+++

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Kesav Easwaran 10 April 2009

gamble or gamble not...it's all blind game...good write, Mousumi...thanks...10

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Lynda Robson 04 April 2009

Good flow and content, an enjoyable read Mousumi 10 Lynda xx

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Catrina Heart 04 April 2009

Such an interesting and moving piece written with fine rhymes and rhythm....nicelly penned...10

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Muhammad Ali 04 April 2009

beautiful touch mousumi ray well done 10

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