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At First Sight

Here meets the blind date with her
A stumble upon at the crossroad near

Slowly deepens the meeting of hearts
And souls throb silently apart

Eyes struck one to one with touch
As one is void of look a far

And the best moment enchants
The eyes, the hearts and all over

‘Not to give up’ vowed the time
‘Not to renew the old love line’

Blind date today sees through…
As science made him so;

But the images make him cry
What’s real and what’s a lie.

Endless sea and the night horizon
Reveals the eternity to his beckon

And life slides onto this
Everyday with every new trice

Blind date starts words-session
Ingrains diction to be done
One by one…

All the gestures, we make
All the movements, we preserve
One by one…

In a flash,

One moment blew his present
A black-out shadow went past
And the blindness attained dark
A sweet phase faded at last.

04/04/09

Submitted: Saturday, April 04, 2009
Edited: Sunday, November 15, 2009


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  • Sarwar Chowdhury (6/23/2009 9:35:00 AM)

    compact beautiful composition!
    10+++

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  • Kesav Easwaran (4/10/2009 9:11:00 PM)

    gamble or gamble not...it's all blind game...good write, Mousumi...thanks...10

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  • Lynda Robson (4/4/2009 4:00:00 PM)

    Good flow and content, an enjoyable read Mousumi

    10
    Lynda xx

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  • Catrina Heart (4/4/2009 10:42:00 AM)

    Such an interesting and moving piece written with fine rhymes and rhythm....nicelly penned...10

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  • Muhammad Ali (4/4/2009 10:28:00 AM)

    beautiful touch mousumi ray
    well done
    10

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