(25 July 1956)

What do you think this poem is about?

At sixes and sevens

Minds are avid part-time sleuths
half asleep with sensors set.
Whet by fret and tripped by threat,
laying bare conflicting truths.
Inside private polling-booths
clues are vetted, outcomes bet.

Living things which move need brains,
tuned response to changing world.
Evolution's path unfurled
specialized machine which trains.
Trial and error process strains
random information swirled.

Primed to spark at fresh events,
disregarding flat surround.
Honed for nature's battleground,
immanent expedience.
Guessing probable percents,
how an outlay may rebound.

Written language multiplies
borrowed wisdom won by few.
Sharing progress, facts accrue,
granting time to improvise.
Answer, hitchhikers advise;
seven sixes, forty-two.

Higher multiverse could be,
highest multiverse could not.
Only parts have timelines plot,
only parts have history.
Terminus infinity;
bright imaginary spot.

Diplomats use structured code,
speech and body language rules,
careful art and formal tools,
sharp negogiating mode,
knowing small mistakes corrode,
knowing poetry makes fools.

Lucky fools are we who meet
piquant puzzles unresolved.
Chance to practice skills evolved,
chance to flounder bittersweet.
Lucky us to know defeat.
Rue the day when all is solved.

Submitted: Saturday, June 09, 2012


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Title refers to syllable, line and stanza count.

Comments about this poem (At sixes and sevens by Diane Hine )

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  • Chuck Audette (7/19/2012 2:16:00 PM)

    For those 70 sextillion stars we might someday chart, our 100 trillion synapses give us a good start.

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  • Danny Draper (6/12/2012 11:17:00 PM)

    A fine write Diane and great poetic journey. I have no fear that if I were to forever grow, everything I would never know. But if I did know all, complete, I would numbly stare down at my feet and pause to wonder all aglow, where with it all could next I go. As I would be omnipotent and a poet to travel and with knowledge to anoint as in the multiverses I could pass through any point.

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  • Captain Cur (6/10/2012 9:20:00 AM)

    Combining Lewis Carroll and Douglas Adams, the multiverse, astronomers can see out 42 billion light years.
    Power packed little number as is your poem. You take us into the stratoshere and beyond then crash right back down on little ole' earth. Love these types of poems that shock us out of our normal thinking patterns.

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  • Valerie Dohren (6/10/2012 7:12:00 AM)

    The intricacies of the human brain and it's evolution are astonishing, as is this poem. Great write Diane.

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  • Charles James (6/10/2012 6:22:00 AM)

    All the joys of thought! I can't imagine there will come a day when ALL is solved. I hope not! Excellent poem.

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