Athene's Bird - The Sign Poem by Tracey Hardie

Athene's Bird - The Sign

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Athene's Bird
The Sign

Scarring the olive tree’s bared limb
I perched
rooting eight ivory talons
in feckless foliage from an early spring.

Sunrays reach in demising night
watching gilded eyes
resting on her sight,
a goddess reaching
towards bellowing clouds
that hazed the sun to silence.

A stirring breeze commands
my cryptic wings
to fly like a slave, tethered,
landing gently upon her frame
as if the winds caressed her skin.

In a moment of stillness,
a stream is heard
babbling to stones on its journey
to a place I’ve never been,
where soldiers search the skies
for my flight,

the sign of victory.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 16 February 2008

Superior work, indeed, Tracey.Structurally mellifluous, and descriptively effulgent. Your poetic largesse paints a broad & spirited spectrum. ~ FjR ~

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