David Bennett

Rookie (Manchester)

'Autumn Day' - Poem by David Bennett

'AUTUMN DAY'

Beautiful colours whats left of the leafs,
Summer has left us winter is near
Crisp Autumn day squirrels store nuts
Light quickly fading
Low sun in the sky
Clear nights are on us
Frost quickly falls!

Children are playing in fast fading light
Night is upon us longer than day
Spring seems to be, so far away
Grass stopping growing dew on the ground
Most beautiful of seasons colder than two
Snow soon be falling,
Leafs blown away,
Gods gift to us a beautiful late Autumn day!

David Bennett.


Comments about 'Autumn Day' by David Bennett

  • Rookie David Bennett (11/22/2008 6:39:00 AM)

    Thank you Marilyn so much,
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  • Rookie - 329 Points Marilyn Lott (11/22/2008 6:37:00 AM)

    I love this poem, Dave, about one of my favorite seasons. Children playing, leaves falling - a wonderful fresh picture you paint. A '10! ' from me! Keep writing and sharing.

    Best Wishes,
    Marilyn (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 22, 2008



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