Autumn Love At Twilight (Tanka) Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

Autumn Love At Twilight (Tanka)

Rating: 5.0


my love at twilight—
an incandescent orange
extinguished in blue
night winds shake my memories
like the leaves from Autumn trees

Monday, October 29, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: autumn,love,memories,sea,sunset,trees
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 30 October 2018

Mihaela, such a pretty poem.......10+++++++++++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 October 2018

An elegant little piece of poetry! The use of simile seems pragmatic! (10)

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Kostas Lagos 29 October 2018

Love in the autumn! Sweet and lovely tanka poem!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 October 2018

Love shines very bright at the twilight of Autumn and with beauty of mercy we can move ahead. Leaves for autumn tree we can see and feel. An interesting poem is beautifully penned that highlights autumn.

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M Asim Nehal 29 October 2018

Awesome Tanka, never thought that way, seasonal love at its best...I am sure it will blossom and bloom by winter.10++++

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