my love at twilight—
an incandescent orange
extinguished in blue
night winds shake my memories
like the leaves from Autumn trees
An elegant little piece of poetry! The use of simile seems pragmatic! (10)
Love shines very bright at the twilight of Autumn and with beauty of mercy we can move ahead. Leaves for autumn tree we can see and feel. An interesting poem is beautifully penned that highlights autumn.
Awesome Tanka, never thought that way, seasonal love at its best...I am sure it will blossom and bloom by winter.10++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Mihaela, such a pretty poem.......10+++++++++++