Autumn - Tanka Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Autumn - Tanka

Rating: 5.0


Autumn morning came
With a strong and bitter wind
That cut like a knife
The birds never dared to fly
Colorful leaves gained their wings.


Copyright 2021, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 14 September 2021

Beauty of this wonderful short work lies with colourful leaves! A beautiful little poem. Full marks.

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Nabakishore Dash 15 September 2021

Colourful leaves gained their wings.Great thought.Allyour very short poems indicate lofty ideas and teaching.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 21 September 2021

Delightfully vivid and lovely! Autumn at its best.

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Soran M. H 13 October 2021

The birds never dared to fly Colorful leaves gained their wings.

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Soran M. H 13 October 2021

part2/ a human reading of the seasons gives his personal impressions through nature, thank you, our dear poet for your beautiful poetic talents

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Anjandev Roy 09 March 2023

Lovely work........thanks for sharing.....

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Rebecca Navarre 27 March 2022

And beyond 5 Stars! .. Excellently painted picture and feel of autumn! .. And I love the ending lines! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 27 March 2022

These few lines is almost like an awe inspiring book! .. Filled with wonder and beauty! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

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Rebecca Navarre 27 March 2022

Again Oh Wow! .. How beautifully, beautifully and powerfully described! ..

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Soran M. H 13 October 2021

Part1/ I consider autumn the season of poets, it is the season of change and departure, has a great influence on the feeling of poets,

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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