Awake Poem by Amanda May Moore

Awake

Rating: 4.5


Free from the night air
I look on high and say a prayer.
It is time to begin yet another affair.
I am awake and fully aware
Of the beautiful sunrise- I sit and stare.
This is an event that is very rare
For us to both sit here with this sunrise to share.
But what is unfair
Is that it will not always be there.
The day will continue on and on without a care.
So it is in this moment that we must beware
That it needs to be cherished with lots of loving care.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Dorn 13 January 2008

Very wise words. Keep writing, Amanda, you have a lot to offer!

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Ben Gieske 15 July 2007

You say it with such loving care and impart to us a thought worth living and sharing. Thanks for your gift today. Ben

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Eric Pennington 09 July 2007

Amanda, you're so freakin ballin! I wish I could write as good as you. and by the way I found another poem I wrote :) . You should check it out :)

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Amanda May Moore

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Ypsilanti Michigan
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