Awake Poem by Mark louie Cañete

Awake

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Foolish heart of mine
Why did you doubted thine?
He is one of a kind
But still you left Him behind

He surrounds you with goodness
that you experienced and witnessed
yet you chose those that perish
because you only thought of its sweetness

Now You are asking thy self
Why can't you explain oneself
Though He is near, you cannot conceive
Because you are full of deceit

See how it pulls you deeper on the ground
It even conquers your being upside down
From then and after, it made you frown
Does this feeling contend you all around?

Unveil life would be an answer to recover
Wasted life is never late to prosper
It is yourself who creates barriers and borders
Shun those things and remember that being divine is forever!

Thursday, November 4, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: god
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gillena Cox 26 January 2012

interesting read; i suppose love being a divine quality exists always

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Gillena Cox 19 November 2010

a profound message written an interesting rhyming style

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Mohammad Muzzammil 18 November 2010

Really nice poem which is worthy to be read and praised. You've presented your poem in a good way. Your language is simple but message is great. Nice to read it.

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Edmund Calleja 04 November 2010

Very deep thoughts which are accompanied by good rhymes.

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