B. R. O. A. D. W. A. Y. Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

B. R. O. A. D. W. A. Y.

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Broad daylight! ! Cut! Exposed! ! ! Your nakedness! ! ! ! Broad is the way to destruction! Following after lies than, the works of the truth;

Rules everywhere! ! Rules of love and life! Natural Laws! ! ! Able to see the light of the truth; to overcome the odds of life along the line;

Open your eyes! ! Watch out! Peace much needed! ! ! War kills and than war; WAR destroys and Kills;

All for love! ! All about life! All the best; when, the right thing is done; without hatred and war.

Dreams! ! ! Dreams of love and life! Living and Learning always along the line; but, why is mankind so wicked on earth?

With true love we can conquer everywhere! ! We can even touch the Blue Sky! So, why do we hate each other? ! Living on earth;

Alright with my mind today! ! For Peace and Love to all mankind without racism! Only to share and care for others along the line;

Yes! The truth is all that we need! ! Able to push the World forward! ! ! Without hatred and war! Only for righteous morals.

Friday, October 11, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: poetic expression,wrong vs. right
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 12 October 2019

Righteous Report! ! The truth is all that we need. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Stay blessed always.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 October 2019

With true love we can conquer everywhere! ! We can even touch the Blue Sky! So, why do we hate each other? ! Living on earth; ......right, We will never hate each other. A brilliant poem is well executed with lofty theme. Thanks for sharing this gem with us.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 October 2019

Narrow is the Key! ! Narrow is the way to Salvation! Only FEW follow after this path of righteous morals; In the name of righteous laws.

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