Edward Kofi Louis

Gold Star - 76,591 Points (13th October 1961 / Accra, GHANA)

10 Steps To Heaven - Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

10 steps to heaven are like the '10 Commandments'!
But look around and see the truth;
Are we really keeping the laws? ! !
Then, we need to rethink to follow these steps.


Comments about 10 Steps To Heaven by Edward Kofi Louis

  • Kevin Patrick (1/13/2016 9:06:00 PM)

    Short but deeply thoughtful, the message is provocative and does make you think. Thank you for sharing (Report) Reply

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  • Howard Savage (12/30/2015 6:05:00 AM)

    Brings us face to face with reality. Introspection. Good Reminder. (Report) Reply

  • Jasbir Chatterjee Jasbir Chatterjee (12/23/2015 12:15:00 AM)

    Jesus Christ made it so simple for us by compressing all the rules into 10 simple commandments. But unfortunately, even these are not followed strictly. (Report) Reply

  • Shahin Latif Shahin Latif (11/29/2015 12:27:00 PM)

    So nice poem. Really I think your poem & I enjoyed it. Thank you so much Dearest poet Edward Kofi Louis. (Report) Reply

  • Vishal Sharma Vishal Sharma (10/16/2015 5:43:00 AM)

    mind blowing words you are a word genius (Report) Reply

  • Nyota Yasulwe Nyota Yasulwe (10/6/2015 12:47:00 AM)

    A short poem that makes me rethink my relationship with God! (Report) Reply

  • Liza Sud Russia Liza Sud Russia (9/15/2015 9:59:00 AM)

    I also need to rethink to follow these steps. (Report) Reply

  • * Sunprincess * (8/26/2015 9:29:00 AM)

    .........very nicely penned, everyone should read this....thank you for sharing ★ (Report) Reply

  • Melvina Germain Melvina Germain (8/15/2015 6:39:00 PM)

    I think you make your point very clear hear, food for thought indeed..... (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad Akhtar Jawad (7/27/2015 6:47:00 AM)

    We have been fighting in the name of religion for centuries but how many of us follow the laws framed by our religion. It's a great write.............................10 (Report) Reply

  • Joseph Dela Sulh (losembe) Joseph Dela Sulh (losembe) (6/30/2015 10:53:00 AM)

    Spectacular. The image is well-portrayed (Report) Reply

  • Herbert Guitang Herbert Guitang (6/28/2015 8:47:00 AM)

    A simple poem but a difficult question to answer
    A good reflection
    Good work (Report) Reply

  • Farah Ilyas Farah Ilyas (5/15/2011 5:13:00 AM)

    hmmmmmm nice poem
    i like ur style to present poem in brief form (Report) Reply

  • Tsira Gogeshvili (10/27/2010 10:51:00 AM)

    Between heaven and a hell it is difficult to find a golden mean... The truth is beautiful but the lie of night is more sweetly for somebody..10..
    Ts (Report) Reply

  • Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (9/8/2010 11:03:00 AM)

    ‘10 Commandments’ ~ Has been read and taught in myriad ways we academically know much since time immemorial …

    Even from Nursery Books so many good teachings we know now time to follow …

    And it is the exercise we need ….a reminder ‘Memo’ to me… Thanks for sharing Hon’ble Poet Edward
    Regards
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 25, 2010

Poem Edited: Monday, May 16, 2011


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