Edward Kofi Louis

Gold Star - 28,614 Points (13th October 1961 / Accra, GHANA)

10 Steps To Heaven - Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

10 steps to heaven are like the '10 Commandments'!
But look around and see the truth;
Are we really keeping the laws? ! !
Then, we need to rethink to follow these steps.


Comments about 10 Steps To Heaven by Edward Kofi Louis

  • Gold Star - 23,139 Points * Sunprincess * (8/26/2015 9:29:00 AM)

    .........very nicely penned, everyone should read this....thank you for sharing ★ (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 6,219 Points Melvina Germain (8/15/2015 6:39:00 PM)

    I think you make your point very clear hear, food for thought indeed..... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,017 Points Akhtar Jawad (7/27/2015 6:47:00 AM)

    We have been fighting in the name of religion for centuries but how many of us follow the laws framed by our religion. It's a great write.............................10 (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,359 Points Joseph Dela Sulh (losembe) (6/30/2015 10:53:00 AM)

    Spectacular. The image is well-portrayed (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,164 Points Herbert Guitang (6/28/2015 8:47:00 AM)

    A simple poem but a difficult question to answer
    A good reflection
    Good work (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (5/15/2011 5:13:00 AM)

    hmmmmmm nice poem
    i like ur style to present poem in brief form (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 15 Points Tsira Gogeshvili (10/27/2010 10:51:00 AM)

    Between heaven and a hell it is difficult to find a golden mean... The truth is beautiful but the lie of night is more sweetly for somebody..10..
    Ts (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 166 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (9/8/2010 11:03:00 AM)

    ‘10 Commandments’ ~ Has been read and taught in myriad ways we academically know much since time immemorial …

    Even from Nursery Books so many good teachings we know now time to follow …

    And it is the exercise we need ….a reminder ‘Memo’ to me… Thanks for sharing Hon’ble Poet Edward
    Regards
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 25, 2010

Poem Edited: Monday, May 16, 2011


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