Edward Kofi Louis

Gold Star - 12,355 Points (13th October 1961 / Accra, GHANA)

10 Steps To Heaven - Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

10 steps to heaven are like the '10 Commandments'!
But look around and see the truth;
Are we really keeping the laws? ! !
Then, we need to rethink to follow these steps.


Comments about 10 Steps To Heaven by Edward Kofi Louis

  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (5/15/2011 5:13:00 AM)

    hmmmmmm nice poem
    i like ur style to present poem in brief form (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 15 Points Tsira Gogeshvili (10/27/2010 10:51:00 AM)

    Between heaven and a hell it is difficult to find a golden mean... The truth is beautiful but the lie of night is more sweetly for somebody..10..
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  • Rookie - 94 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (9/8/2010 11:03:00 AM)

    ‘10 Commandments’ ~ Has been read and taught in myriad ways we academically know much since time immemorial …

    Even from Nursery Books so many good teachings we know now time to follow …

    And it is the exercise we need ….a reminder ‘Memo’ to me… Thanks for sharing Hon’ble Poet Edward
    Regards
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 25, 2010

Poem Edited: Monday, May 16, 2011


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