Ali Sabry

Rookie - 220 Points (11/8/1988 / Iraq - Baghdad)

((Baby Dear To My Heart)) - Poem by Ali Sabry

Baby dear to my heart

Yesterday was the festival generators and I have completed the age twenty-third

But I didn't seen you beside me

I was very sad

I was very sad because I have not celebrated this year

Far my birth because I was alone all night

We have celebrated alone with the walls of the house

I slept whole the night and the pillow next to me free

Honey I couldn't seen you beside me that night

I cried like a baby all night

I will be keep waiting for the day after the other

Hoping to meet you again in the near future

My God Bless You In Whole Your Life

Your Lover Forever In Whole Your Life
The Romantic Man
Ali Sabry

Comments about ((Baby Dear To My Heart)) by Ali Sabry

  • Gold Star - 10,112 Points Heather Wilkins (7/25/2013 6:39:00 PM)

    excellent love letter. a good write expressing your missing your love. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Antimoni Dutta (6/3/2013 2:21:00 AM)

    it proves that you can do a lot in literature. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 20 Points Jude Thadeus (1/3/2013 1:31:00 AM)

    Your words pierces like niddle, the message is strong and clear... I love it, good job. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,115 Points Musfiq Us Shaleheen (11/30/2012 1:02:00 PM)

    very emotive and the expression of love is heart wrenching..... i missed it very much because its reality. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 22 Points Sasidharan Vellat Menon (11/19/2012 3:00:00 AM)

    Missing Your Love - You said it in the best way you can. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 70 Points Ansha Truter (10/19/2012 10:38:00 PM)

    Poetry is usually personal but yours was taken to another level of being personal. I can almost feel your pain and sadness. I would like to see more of your work on different topics though... Great poetry indee Keep it up (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Randy Micheal (10/6/2012 4:17:00 AM)

    nice idea.....wonderful expression (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Saeed Jan (9/27/2012 3:07:00 PM)

    The idea is very nice, truly moved by the passion... Deeply felt emotion and natural outburst of it turning to be ur voice... Just a bit fault (may be u doing intentionally) is that of grammar, and also no musicality and rhythm... Overall, is a superb piece of beauty... Keep it up bro' (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Davina Teeling (8/28/2012 1:55:00 AM)

    This poem is very nice, but there are some things that I couldnt quite make sence of. But the poem is still very powerful. And I understand it plenty. Your telling a story of how you now have turned 23 and your lover whom is dear to you, isn't there to celebrate that day with you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 421 Points Shania K. Younce (8/15/2012 7:17:00 PM)

    I dare say that I like this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Cliff Ceekay (8/15/2012 10:29:00 AM)

    wow, i like the work.prove it that you can do more that this. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 14, 2012

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