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TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila . (25TH OF APRIL / PaLeSTiNe)
***A Mermaid's SleeP WhicH used to EscapE In A WaitinG ShapE
last night where the soul's sorrow was a mate,
last night where she found one start,
an end of a falling tear, or perhaps a newborn of a pain..
last night where a start left a trace of rain in her cloudy eyes...calling he who knows how to dive in oceans of her hidden emotions, who invade the soul....
who could find where are the holes of a traveling ship,
who could be a captain for her trip,
. her sleep which used to escape in a waiting shape,
while waiting for little hope...
....for a healer to
eradicate the
killer of the souls..to knot that broken rope.
the seeker seek arts of reading soaring hearts,
an artist in listening, singing, reading others' arts
before tasting that pleasure of a sailor's arrival..before the arrival knocks her doors...she found him on his shores and again ready to depart...
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A Mermaid's SleeP WhicH used to EscapE In A WaitinG ShapE is a poem lush with lovely lines all through especially ' last night where the soul's sorrow was a mate, / last night where she found one start, / an end of a falling tear, or perhaps a newborn of a pain.. / last night where a start left a trace of rain in her cloudy eyes...calling he who knows how to dive in oceans of her hidden emotions, who invade the soul....'
oceanic words! ! ! lovely! ! !
nyc poem! ! .........................................
longful and lonely, well written, good write tamara
Enjoy the freshness of your phrasing and the images you use to express your ideas and feelings.
thx for the invitation, u were right, i enjoyed ur poem
A unique topic expressed in an interesting and heartfelt manner...thank you for recommending
all I can say is wow! ! ! ! 10+++ expressed feelings very well, because they are well understood and felt also.
thanks for sharing
An interesting piece that will require another reading or two before I can respond in depth, will come again soon.... Best wishes, Rhumour
It is a really touching. I heard the mermaid's story when i was a child. But your poem so nicely conveys the sadness and the solitude of the mermaid. After reading your peom, I just felt if i were the sailor, then would have stopped and brought her along with me on the ship back to the city.