Bad Idea Poem by Etienne Charilaou

Bad Idea



All promises
lie broken.
My cold hand
shaking,
attempting to
unfreeze
the frozen.

Saturday, March 2, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lodigiana Poetess 03 March 2019

Delightful if sad! Such a refreshingly succinct piece of work and a very satisfying read! Thank you so much for sharing this. Lodigiana x

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Lodigiana Poetess 03 March 2019

Delightful! Such a refreshingly succinct piece of work and a very satisfying read! Thank you so much for sharing this. Lodigiana x

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Kostas Lagos 02 March 2019

A depressive masterpiece

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