Bad Soul Poem by Laura arwen

Bad Soul



I have got a crazy soul
cause I'm fall in love
I've a strange bounce
but my mind and my heart are rock
All this things are good medicine for me
I have got many lazy friends
but my really friend is my secret diary
I haven't got modern things
cause I'm a rock star
I've got two tattoos and
I've got a bad soul
I'm a polite and a bad person
My friends wanted to abused me
but immediately I called the police
I'm hard with myself
ahead I've got a bad soul
My parents used me for their hard job
and I cry for the innocents
I'm confuse for my future
cause I want to have, any children
but my parents want an important person
I'm happy with sex and drugs
My soul is very bad and sarcastic
cause in the world there are many wars
To have a bad soul is to
think a suicide or a bad
thing for myself
I'm peaceful if in the world there
aren't the criminals
I've a bad soul when I
look a naked man
S romantic book is a good
antidote for my bad soul
And the rock'n'roll
music too
The bad soul provokes nervous
and laziness
No cure cure
my bad soul
The bad soul provokes
this boogie woogie fever
and the confusion
I'm weak
I'm confused
I've got Jesus and
for this I need a bad soul
My soul corrupted for
the persecutions
My soul is very important
for an insecure person
It's too dangerous to show
my aggressive soul
My bad soul is a part
of me
My bad soul is a continual and
true obsession
Is ironic to have a bad soul
cause it provokes solitude and
reflections
Bad is nasty thing while
soul is a soft thing
To have a bad soul is a pleasure
A bad soul can to cause a sentinel

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 15 March 2017

I counted 15 repetitions of the phrase BAD SOUL, but if your purpose was to disparage yourself, it didn't work for me. I see everywhere your hidden soul beneath the visible, corruptible soul, and it is gaining strength from these conflicts in the world and preserving its precious wholeness until IT IS TIME. I see a woman who can say with Shakespeare's suffering King, I AM MORE SINNED AGAINST THAN SINNING. Isn't that amazing I can read this poem and find in it an eventual Redemption and New Life of the Soul, But I do.

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 December 2016

You can still change one day. To enhance your status of your soul. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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