Balance Of Power (Senryu) Poem by Govind Ramakrishnan

Balance Of Power (Senryu)



time to be pampered
grandma is coming to town;
parents neutralized

© 2016

Tuesday, April 12, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: fun
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My grandmother is visiting me starting next week for a month.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stephen Park 18 April 2016

I know what you mean, grand parents spoil the grand children. all the love without the responsibility! great take on that concept.

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Gil Highlander 12 April 2016

loved the title and the poem was like a fresh breeze. i love your haiku and senryu submissions. keep them coming!

42 28 Reply
Kelly Kurt 12 April 2016

A perfect Senryu. Most of us can relate. Enjoy your visit.

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Govind Ramakrishnan 13 April 2016

Thank you very much. Coming from you it means a lot.

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