Bearing Hera's curse
She could only
Repeat
The last words
That she'd just heard
As Narcissus' rejection,
Becomes
The final nail
In her coffin,
Embracing
Death
She leaves her
Own voice behind
Echo!
My heart is with you!
Shunned by love
You remain
Immortal
As the hidden mirror of sound
© 2016
Absolutely beautiful writing. Thank you for posting this.
Thanks Anil, for taking time to read, appreciate and comment. Best, Govind
Amazing free verse and so rich with color and emotion. I just loved the ending, Shunned by love, you remain Immortal as the hidden mirror of sound. So will this poem be- immortal.
Thanks for that wonderful comment, without lovely readers of poetry like you, it would never be possible.
Love and immortality echos of soul. Very interesting and wise poem is nicely penned. Congratulations for seeing you and your poem here as poem of the day.10
Thank you Sir for your kind comments, they do mean a lot to me.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Echo! My heart is with you! Shunned by love You remain Immortal As the hidden mirror of sound Thanks for the beautiful poem shared, so nicely written.10 for it.