Balcony Vi Poem by Sadiqullah Khan

Balcony Vi

Rating: 5.0


On tiptoe you came
The playful hiss
Of the scarf touching
The marble floor

The candle lit
In the corner of the room
Into gold is turned
Everything visible

The silver of the moon
From the window
The dark silhouettes
Of the trees behind

The climber on the window
Hanging flowers
In white and red
The hanging on the wall
A miniature of the lady
Eyes wide open
For the love she sees

In the city of love
The rooms are built
Of gold and marble
Seen but in reality
They are the dust
Of the feet of lovers

Like musk and amber
The red of the carpet
From pashmina of Kashmir
The silk drapes in indigo

A song of love my dear you sing
The moments tonight are forever
16/10/2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 30 October 2008

I have read your all belcony series. Ammmmmazing! They depict your powerful poetic vision 10+++++++

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Anjali Sinha 16 October 2008

'Like musk and amber The red of the carpet From pashmina of Kashmir The silk drapes in indigo' The whole of Kashmir is unfolded in its splendour. I love your passionate description of love on the Balcony. A+ and 10+ regards anjali

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Reshma Ramesh 16 October 2008

The rooms are built Of gold and marble Seen but in reality They are the dust Of the feet of lovers how beautifullll sadiq this made me hold my breath.....

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Seema Chowdhury 16 October 2008

very nice composition. very smooth flow.

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