Balloon And Parachute Poem by Maria Rose

Balloon And Parachute

Rating: 5.0


My boyfriend and I
Grew up together as playmates.
In our twelfth year we went
to the Mountain of Gifts.
I found a Balloon and a Parachute
Whereas my pal got only a balloon.

Arose my balloon
To the sky with my ecstacy
Until a rapturous explosion
sinking me to a heavenly stupor
That trembled my soul as I descended
To a bluish-green lake of a sky
Floating in my Parachute.

Away somewhere my pal went up
To an upward Odyssey to a fatal explosion
And fell down to earth and broke his spine.
He was angry with me.
He chained me to him so that
I would never caress the sky alone.

He took me to the sky with him
And clung to me to get
A share of my parachute.
The burden brought us down so fast that it
nearly injured us both.
He was desperate.
He chained me tighter so that
I would never kiss the sky alone.

Years and years rolled by.
Still he is afraid of falling
from heights.
Still he has a faulty spine.
Still he used to beg ridiculously
for a share of my Parachute.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LOVEFOOL Aka 14 March 2008

Really intense fast paced riveting read thank you

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Benson Muthoka 25 March 2008

Very creative. sympathies for your boyfriend.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 24 March 2008

An interesting story to read. Well written.

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Aasiq the poet 19 March 2008

marvellous poem..thanks 10 here for you maria..

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Jones Jones 14 March 2008

reads rather introspective maria rose... first impression is that your boyfriend... then.. was jealous and that you wanted freedom and that you in fact blossomed while he spent much time in your shadow... maybe i am way off the mark so i will have another read some time and see what it says to me next time around..

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Like the tone you set from the opening line...lots of positive verve & movement, here...smooth & crisp.Solid crafting. ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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