My Lady Eagle

Rookie (08/12/1989 / Caloocan, Philippines)

Barefooted - Poem by My Lady Eagle

It's...
Strange.
I feel no love.
I see no strangers-
There's only known faces:
Couples that were dancing.

Yes, the sunlight was romancing
In the late afternoon
And in my afternoon heart,
Which by midnight
Would be less as it seemed

For I will take notice
That I was walking on bare feet-
Without reaching
Her shores.


Comments about Barefooted by My Lady Eagle

  • Silver Star - 3,250 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (4/19/2010 5:23:00 PM)

    A beautiful poetic dance my friend... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Kristoffer Randolf Ramos (4/8/2010 10:05:00 PM)

    seems that love is miles away from u though u are fascinated by love of someone.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie a a (4/7/2010 4:28:00 AM)

    More rhythmn less parraellel rhymes. Uv got good potential. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 13, 2010

Poem Edited: Monday, March 29, 2010


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