Battle Poem by Carlos Rivera

Battle

Rating: 5.0


Life can be tough
but you have friends who care
nevermind those
who just laugh and point and stare

So dont through your life away
your friends will beg for you to stay

Dont fear
tell life to bring it on
have courage
cause life's battle's just begun

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 17 April 2011

You are absolutely right, we all have friends that for us care and You astoundingly talent with whole to share! Keep on writing my friend! Excellent write! 10+++ Love and Peace for always! ...

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i agree with ash its a good poem and its true. very nice keep it up.

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this is a good poem n its so true.... :) keep writin 100++++ ~ash~

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