S.zaynub Kamoonpuri

(bbbb) Poetic Perfumery - Poem by S.zaynub Kamoonpuri

O' poets switch off today all senses but one
as you enter the arena of aroma
As I nose out the world's perfumes
To boost your nasal stamina

A dainty phial of perfume's indeed
a preferred and perfect present
The joy of the lady, the joy of the gent
A vial of perfume's a gift lovely and fragrant
A gift of a whiff, for all to sniff
from scents sophisticated and pleasant.

And she sashays trailing behind her a tantalizing trail
of her choicest elegant fragrances
As for Indian me I'm fond of sandalwood too
of sweet sillage and unique nuances.

He loves to revel in her lingering scent
Treasuring it to form scented hints of memory
It soon becomes his favorite fragrance
as he inhales in the imagined potpourri.

Sensual scents do swell for sentient man
to satisfy his olfactory cell, to gratify his sense of smell
Wherever you may go, wherever you may be
Tis trendy to leave that tell-tale perfume trail...

It's thanks to medieval Eastern Avicenna
we can extract fragrances from the flora
Extraction of essential oils from jasmines and rosewood
To expel and dispel any trace of miasma
with aromas of flowers such as freesias and mimosa.
Thus explore the enticing effect of extracted essence
Ooh to luxuriate oneself in assorted floral fragrance!

And that lands us in the world of fragrant agarwood
of middle eastern ittars or attars for aesthetic incense
To diffuse in your sacraments mystical frankincense
The strong nuances too of the scents of enchanting oud
and thus enjoy the tenacity of entrancing fragrance.

And from dawn unto dusk
my favorite scent is that of musk
It's distinct, distinguished scent
made me a fan so fervent!

As for a more occidental smell
my choice is sweet and refreshing lavender
While others prefer eau de cologne
or the intoxicating smell of ethyl and ester

And for fragrant balms from balsams
Explore the realm of the strong heady scents
No matter if they're mere synthetic blends
They're gorgeous infusions for your glamorous garments

To extirpate smells putrid and pungent
Comes in handy a pleasing spray odorant.

Enhance the refreshing smells of the great ozone
with honeysuckle air freshners and for you the roll on.

Ah modern or ancient times, the world's enthralled by fragrance
Be it western parfum or oriental patchouli
Ah bask in those lingering hints of scents
as you explore the aromatic world of perfumery

This isn't meant to be a sales catalogue
It's merely to present the perfumes in vogue.

So much for the world of perfumes compressed into a nutshell
All is well as long as God may bless our sense of smell!

Comments about (bbbb) Poetic Perfumery by S.zaynub Kamoonpuri

  • Joe Breunig (3/20/2014 9:47:00 AM)

    An interesting piece; appreciated the message.

    -Joe Breunig,
    author/poet, Reaching Towards His Unbounded Glory
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  • Soulful Heart (3/3/2014 11:10:00 AM)

    Hmmmmmmm......thats taking in the perfumes blended together to invoke our olfactory cells....the ancient natural ones and the recent synthetic ones completely apart in content yet functioning d same.....great write (Report) Reply

  • (1/17/2014 1:45:00 AM)

    Very original idea, I like it. Felt like I was in a perfume factory myself and
    taking in all the beautiful scents. Very sensual too. Thank you for sharing.
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  • (12/10/2013 4:18:00 AM)

    nice poem. v nicely expressed. it is more difficult to express more ordinary.
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  • Bri Edwards (11/23/2013 8:36:00 PM)

    i prefer the smells of cooking meat and vegetables, and fresh fruit, and cheese, and baking baked goods, and CHOCOLATE! it really is rare that i smell perfume, but it is pleasing (for me) to smell an enticing aromatic trail of a mysterious lady. a few times i have smelled one which brought back fond memories of a woman from my past. thanks for sharing. :)
    thanks for rhymes and alliterations.
    e.g. Sensual scents do swell for sentient man
    to satisfy his olfactory cell, to gratify his sense of smell and arena of aroma

    p.s. there were a couple of guys on the bus today who could have used some sandalwood or jasmine! ! !
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  • Hasnain Aaqib (7/28/2013 2:50:00 AM)

    very nice write and a creative effort matching a meterical expression. (Report) Reply

  • Lyn Paul (7/7/2013 3:04:00 AM)

    What a wonderful write, I smell beauty in these words. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Xelam Kan™ (7/4/2013 7:45:00 AM)

    Wow, great and unique way of Describing sense of smelling......
    Feels i m in French Mall where every sort of fragrance sprinkled around..........
    From east to west......world of perfumery rejoicing us
    Though bit lengthy but still Well penned.
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  • Tabandeh Heidary Bafghy (6/27/2013 5:27:00 AM)

    hi my friend
    how niiiice
    very beautiful
    thank you
    good luck
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  • Aftab Alam Khursheed (6/23/2013 11:19:00 AM)

    olfactory refinement a universal call very nice (Report) Reply

  • (6/22/2013 7:50:00 AM)

    Very nice. I like the ending here This isn't meant to be a sales catalogue/ It's merely to present the perfumes in vogue - you're lines about perfumes are so refreshing. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Waseem A Malla (6/21/2013 11:41:00 PM)

    as if I was smelling the flowers and the sandalwood while reading it. Hats off... Going to read more of your poems(after i finish my exams this month) ... (Report) Reply

  • (6/21/2013 4:49:00 PM)

    I really enjoyed this. I could almost smell the beautiful fragrances you mentioned. I grow lavender, roses, honeysuckle, and I always stop to smell them when I'm in the garden. I agree - long live our sense of smell! (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra (6/20/2013 1:23:00 AM)

    sophisticated and pleasant, good poem, thanks.
    I invite you to read my poems and vote and comment.
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 20, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 3, 2013

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