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9.3
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Either be a lamp
Sitting at a place,
Emitting light beams
For swarming moths' solace.
Or be a moth,
Dance around the flame,
Forget your being,
Claim oneness with the flame.
Either be a forest,
Vast vividness embrace;
Lion and lamb live in it,
In diversity do their food trace.
Or be a seed,
Vast forest in embryo;
Get lost into the soil to see,
How does eternity mop & mow! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
C. P. Sharma
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Comments about this poem (Be a lamp! ! !
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C. P. Sharma
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Elena Sandu (4/4/2010 5:39:00 AM)
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My tongue might be too poor for your poems! But my heart has a lot of space to fill, I take the liberty to let some of your poems go straight to it, thank you for writing so beautifully!
..I would like to be a moth....
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Rup Pokharel (9/15/2009 1:53:00 PM)
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I would prefer be a seed.
NICE creation of yours.
i liked it.10++
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rago rago (7/8/2009 9:32:00 PM)
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simple and eloquent words to ponder on........ the poem make me not to sit and make me write write write.............
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Yelena M. (7/5/2009 5:38:00 AM)
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Every person to choose own path...Thanks for this introspective and wise write. Best wishes and keep on your path.
A.
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Catrina Heart (7/3/2009 4:05:00 AM)
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Such a profound piece shared! Symbolic one! ! !
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Ashraful Musaddeq (6/27/2009 7:42:00 PM)
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O if I could be a lamp, or a moth, or a forest, or a seed…
Beautiful poem with nice idea.10+++
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