Be My Valentine.... Poem by Abhijit Surve

Be My Valentine....

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When i woke up this morning, felt something on my face,
Saw myself in the mirror, it wasn't hard to trace..
It was a feeling in disguise, dripping down my eyes,
Resting on my cheeks, in a smile is where it lies..


I felt the moon and stars had come down close to me,
Kept rubbing hands to eyes cause i could hardly see..
Then when a tear dropp landed, right on my finger tip,
The feeling was uncovered when the tear dropp snip..


A cheerful breeze in the air, is what i felt all around,
My journey towards you is filled with happiness unbound..
Got my hands full of a feeling and a pinch of sweet emotion,
Just realized my dream is real, all it need's is your promotion..


The feeling that i carry, is everything that's true love,
All i ask is for your heart to hold it back and shove..
Some love from your tender heart right into my gentle arms,
Would impress you with my words if not with looks and charms..


Whenever, wherever you ask me to, i'll prove my love for you,
Whatever, however you want me to, i promise those things i'll do..
Never will ask a question or deny, neither a 'No' nor a 'Why',
Cause all that i see in your eye, is all that i know and imply..


So please open your heart, together we'll be just fine,
I would die to be all yours would you live to be all mine..
With courage gathered from my heart i ask this cozy line,
I propose to you my dear, 'Will you be my Valentine..? ? '

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Surya . 14 May 2009

very nice poem. touching write. should have been released on feb 15. posted 10 for u surya

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Anjali Sinha 09 March 2009

So please open your heart, together we'll be just fine, I would die to be all yours would you live to be all mine.. With courage gathered from my heart i ask this cozy line, I propose to you my dear, 'Will you be my Valentine..? ? ' wowwwwwwwwwww whoever this you propose too is surely a lucky one --one can see the lovely outpourings -10 anjali

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