Be Ready To Give Love Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Be Ready To Give Love



If you want love
Be ready to give love.

The roots must say to the tree
When you sway in the wind
We fear losing you.

The water must say to the fish
I am your life
Don't leave me.

The night must say to the stars
When you glow
I become myself.

The poet must say to the page
Take my dreams
And fill yourself.

If you want love
Be ready to give love
And say it aloud
Yes! you make me complete.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The idea behind this poem is that lovers must admit they need each other rather than staying shut in their ego shells.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 23 April 2023

I like the word EGO SHELLS very very much, such a golden touch, dear Nosheen, I have read this gorgeous poem as you have never seen. Top Marks Full.5 Stars.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 23 April 2023

This poem has beauty all round it Bravo! ! !

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 23 April 2023

Yes. Love. The more you give the more you get back. Nice poem Nosheen

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Anjandev Roy 23 April 2023

This is an absolute gem.....thanks for sharing....

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Sylvia Frances Chan 23 April 2023

And to MyFavourites, I am missing the possibility of adding the Stars.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 May 2023

How can a fish be out of water? Your expression is an established fact, 'The water must say to the fish I am your life don't leave me'

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M.J. Lemon 04 May 2023

Magnificent! A great uplifting verse...

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Galina Italyanskaya 24 April 2023

Lovely lines: one completes the other. Thank you for sharing!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 April 2023

A lovely poem! I like the way you plan your poetic journey dear poetess! Proceed in this great way.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 23 April 2023

Do you regard Giving Stars to your magnificent poem a big Nonsense? You haven't clicked the button to get these Stars. I wanna give you 5 Stars, dear Nosheen.

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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