Be Relieved Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Be Relieved



Be relieved.
At least those criticisms,
Once directed to you...
Will not be as severe.
And...
You can become more antagonizing,
Than ever before.
But...
With less scrutiny face,
To defend against.
In fact...
You are in a greater position now,
Than you were before.

Be relieved.
At least those criticisms,
Once directed to you...
Will not be as severe.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Colm Hayes 27 April 2011

That was good I had to read it twice to see it, lovely work mate

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