Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 10,798 Points (February/'47 / Connecticut, USA)

Be Relieved - Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Be relieved.
At least those criticisms,
Once directed to you...
Will not be as severe.
And...
You can become more antagonizing,
Than ever before.
But...
With less scrutiny face,
To defend against.
In fact...
You are in a greater position now,
Than you were before.

Be relieved.
At least those criticisms,
Once directed to you...
Will not be as severe.

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Comments about Be Relieved by Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • Rookie - 1 Points Colm Hayes (4/27/2011 6:01:00 PM)

    That was good I had to read it twice to see it, lovely work mate (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 27, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, May 13, 2011


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