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Be With Me, - Poem by maxpoet beauty

Be with me,
Be with me,
Be with mine that we may prosper,
I can see that you will lead in the right path,
Never part from all that I have to share,

In my own understanding,
You will teach me the right judgement from wrong,
I can see that you and me are couple's that never part,
Be with me that we may never fail,
Teach me the right judgements that I may see prosper,
All the right path is all from what never did I deny.


Comments about Be With Me, by maxpoet beauty

  • Rookie - 6 Points Rachel Ann Butler (10/13/2009 12:34:00 PM)

    I can see that you will lead in the right path

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  • Rookie Alex Fairbairn (2/20/2009 8:22:00 AM)

    Yeah, more like this. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Gloria Mihayo (2/20/2009 5:48:00 AM)

    simple and beatiful.
    a bit strong (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 20, 2009



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