Molly O'Shaunessy

Rookie - 65 Points (septemeber 21st,2000 / Wiscousin)

Beatin and Alone


Beatin and alone
people wonder what does that mean
the horror you see in me everyday
beatin and alone
you should be afraid of me
the nickname I hold
beatin and alone
a kid asked me today
what that meant
beatin and alone
I told him
many things have happen to me
two of them
hold my name
beatin and alone
that was me
the girl that was beatin
then was left alone
no one likes it
no one really cares
beatin and alone
is the nickname I hold

Submitted: Saturday, January 11, 2014
Edited: Saturday, January 11, 2014

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,215 Points Eugene Levich (5/8/2014 3:55:00 PM)

    Molly, No one your age needs to suffer the way this touching poem suggests you have! I hope you contacted John Westlake. Your poem makes me very worried about you and I won't be able to sleep well until I know that you are OK. Please let me know! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,145 Points John Westlake (4/24/2014 5:52:00 PM)

    You say that no one cares, I DO! A sad poem that also makes me a little angry. I can relate to it. Message me if you want to talk (Report) Reply

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