Beauty At The Corner Poem by Luz Hanaii

Beauty At The Corner

Rating: 5.0


It was one of my regular walk days
sun, bright as polished brass,
burning away all possibility of dark thoughts.
Suddenly at the corner there she was
attractive, even beautiful, yet her dishabille
look enfolded her in a haunting air of sadness.

I couldn't help to notice her and even
take a second look, she seem to smile,
I got the feeling she wanted me to stop
but I ignored my feelings and continued
on my walk.

Next day I took a different route.
The day lacked the brightness of the sun,
mind struggling to keep away the dark
the gray day sported his usual, London fog.

For days or maybe weeks, I enjoyed
my walks and never thought of her,
that lonely gaze, nor did I
take that route again.

This morning I walked that same old route
not walked in weeks, and unthinking,
I came upon her empty gaze,
her appearance had now changed,
she looked renewed, polished, attractive,
she seemed to shine and smile
displaying a large sign, that read,
FOR SALE.
Sad! but glad you won't be alone any more.

Copyright @2012
Luz Hanaii

Monday, December 9, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: life,observation,walking
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 12 December 2019

A delightful poem, dear Ma’am Luz.....10+++

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Luz Hanaii 14 December 2019

Bernard, thank you much for the 10 and all your support.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 December 2019

This Beauty to MyPoemList. God's Blessings in Abundance. Amen.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 December 2019

I cite you here: her appearance had now changed, she looked renewed, polished, attractive, she seemed to shine and smile How impressively told, dear Luz. I have enjoyed very much this fascinating poem a thought-provoking poem, but yet for me a lovely poem, with excellent metaphors and most beautifully worded. Pure Poetically presented in perfect poetic language A 10 Full Score and myriad of 10's more

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Luz Hanaii 14 December 2019

Thank you dear Sylvia, for reading and commenting. I truly appreciate your support, and 10 score.

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