Bedazzled Was I Poem by Ave Lilik

Bedazzled Was I

Rating: 4.5


Bedazzled
was I- with your eye
Bedazzled
were you- with my view?

If bedazzlement
ever again happen:
Can I
say 'hi'?
Can you
continue?


Beadazzled Corner, Washington DC-US
October 24,2005

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Manners 20 March 2006

Cool poem, Short N sweet, I like the rhyme flow, I dig your poems. Keep rockin St. Sir Michael Manners

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Menur Astutiningtyas 03 November 2005

feels like im there in bedazzled corner. the rhymes are beautiful and the diction are sweet

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