Bee Poem by Rini Shibu

Bee

Rating: 4.7


If you are sweet
the bee buzz around to steal
If you try to steal
the bees flies behind to sting
And You are the loser
in this ring

Sunday, April 22, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: people
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Practicing Poetess 22 April 2018

Do not- - No, Never! - - Try to steal the bee's honey or meat. Unless you are a beekeeper, and are well-covered. Cute poem about how the bee guards its honey with ferocity.

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Robert Murray Smith 22 April 2018

Rini. a great metaphor and so true.

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Lamar Cole 23 April 2018

This is a very nice poem about bees.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 23 April 2018

Dear friend Rini, such a wonderful poem🤓🤓🤓...10++++

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Kostas Lagos 23 April 2018

Another remarkable poem Rini!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 May 2019

If you are sweet the bee buzz around to steal........wonderful imagery. Beautiful poem.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 01 August 2018

Sadly yes, Rini, the bee is always there to buzz around whether to steal or to kill.. A lovely poem. So cutely short.

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Akhtar Jawad 09 May 2018

Bees may be sweet as they produce honey but if a bee takes you otherwise thousands come to attack with that bee.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 April 2018

A short sweet poem Rini...Thanks for sharing...10

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Unnikrishnan E S 24 April 2018

Hi Rini, Sweetness may be a trap, as you say An invitation to the unscrupulous, to give a try. But it is always better to be sweet than bitter For, He has given us all, a sweet tooth. And, of course, my wife is so sweet She has got high sugar in her blood.

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