Before You Leave Poem by Sadiqullah Khan

Before You Leave

Rating: 5.0


A pyramid of goblets
Trickling wine down
Filling each
Who shall take what
And how it blends
In the blood
For the spirit
In the head
Is a matter
Of luck and chance
We move
In a dark maze

The only good happening
While finding
A way out
We meet
When your laughter
Like petals of roses
Your red lips
In between the dimples
On your cheeks
On a sad evening
When it just happens
That we talk for eternity
In a moment
Before you leave

And then all the long night
I talked of your long hairs
9/12/2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 27 December 2008

good 'wine of love'...good spirits..make you talk sweet all the night...beautiful ending lines, Sadiq...the poem talks of facts more than her long hairs...10

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Anjali Sinha 12 December 2008

Is this a goodbye if then its sad whatever nicely expressed ++++++10 as always regards anjali

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C T Heart 09 December 2008

symbolic piece before a goodbye...beautifully written.10

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James Mclain 09 December 2008

Thank you so very much...

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