Behind Oaken Door [repost] Poem by Rehan Hyder

Behind Oaken Door [repost]

Rating: 4.9


Nite Nite Ma! !
He whispers mischeviously
Planting a half done hasty kiss on her
agebeaten brow
Before hastening to hide behind
7x3 feet of an oaken generation gap

Slouching in the lonely arms of
her faithful burgundy couch
she hears the familiar sounds
of drawers, chuckles, running water
sounds which bridge the gap
Between now and youth
she smiles inwardly as memory rushes to paint
The canvas of reminiscence…
Collecting such ingredients as
the sounds and smells of today
Same as were wont
of those spent yesterdays
When there were things more alluring than the
distraction of arthritis and cooking shows
…a painting appears on her mirage of a canvas
Of a youth reincarnated…of a passion rekindled..
The night when deft fingers pulled the pins out
of her hair and in the mirror
she saw divinity put blossoming strokes
upon the 5 ft 8 in of her extension; ; ; ;
Behind that same oaken door.

Wardha..... merci beau comp..2nd repost

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Linda Ori 17 October 2009

Such a beautiful yet sad sentiment, Rehan. We all have our moments of remeniscence, when life and love were young and vibrant. A very touching piece, very effectively written. Linda

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Francesca Martin 07 June 2009

Absolutely wonderful-diction, flow, imagery. Gave it a 10!

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Marieta Maglas 04 June 2009

''Between now and youth she smiles inwardly as memory rushes to paint The canvas of reminiscence…'' he can see her, by being behind the oaken door, and he can paint her with his eyes in his soul....by keeping her youth in his memory......10++

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Sathyanarayana M V S 05 November 2008

This is outstanding poetry in content as well as the expression. Ur words are lovely. A great piece indeed................10

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