Being Broken Poem by Saurabh singh

Being Broken

Rating: 4.8


And the dream died
in flashes
you had time but it
burnt to ashes
The hope to live
Deep crashes
you thought it would be good
but its rough rashes
Now, MR BROKEN..
can you rise from the ashes?

Tuesday, April 18, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: hope,lonely,lost,sad,strong,struggle
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geeta sharma 07 April 2019

Emotions and feelings are being conveyed beautifuly..

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Jazib Kamalvi 17 June 2017

A good optimistic start. Thanks

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Chinedu Dike 18 April 2017

The deplorable condition of life at its lowest ebb is aptly captured in the poem. A well articulated piece of poetry nicely encapsulated with insight. Thanks for sharing Saurabh and welcome to Poemhunter.

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