Being Old Poem by Jem Baker

Being Old

Rating: 4.5


Yes, my body is old
But it’s not the real me.
The real me is as young as you
In fact the real me never changes.

Yes, I’m trapped in a body
That won’t obey me
But don’t let it fool you.
I’m aware of everything around me
And I want to be included.

So don’t look at me with pity
Or talk to me as you would a child
Please don’t make me feel useless
And ignore me.

I have not changed
Not really.
Time has just taken its toll.

The real me is just like you.
With a need to be
Wanted and accepted.

So be patient with me
If I am a little muddled,
Or deaf, or need a strong arm to lean on.

For inside I am fling
Free and young and mobile.
Please……….
Try to see me,
See me as I really am.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mountain Man 05 October 2019

Youth is in the eye of the beholder...Bolder & stronger as we age. Age what does it mean?

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Frank Cannon 09 June 2008

Ageism tremendously tackled by a truly youthful pen.

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Daniel Tyler 02 May 2008

A great concept and well-delivered.

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Shaun William Hayes 20 April 2008

Time betrays us all, inside we are all eighteen and beautiful still. nicely done. Shaun (a very young 53) : o)

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