Bent Poem by edria salsa

Bent

Rating: 4.2


You have to accept the fact
About something strange on your spine
Since 7 you was given a gift
One that you couldn't see
But could feel it
Lived 10 years old
Between the fragility and strength
That killer back pain
That cry-ing
That you know you couldn't be tall like anyone else
then you realized
it wasn't straight
the X-Rays would show
this curved
this deformed
your perfection aren't normal
ruined your life
10 years and still counting
Getting worse and worse
And the worst part is
No one cares.

Bent
Monday, March 14, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: disease
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 14 March 2016

this curved this deformed your perfection aren't normal ruined your life 10 years and still counting Getting worse and worse And the worst part is No one cares. And the worst is that on one cares. i am left alone with my pain. this sentence at the end touched me and gave me a lot of pain.

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Soul Watcher 14 March 2016

Nice write, thanks for sharing Edria.

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Gajanan Mishra 14 March 2016

getting worse and worse, good write..

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