We talk together,
My smile, your eyes,
We eye our smiles,
My eyes on your eyes,
We laugh together-
-Life is confusing.
You're drinking blue,
I'm swallowing, we smirk,
You spit it out,
I'm gagging, we roar,
You're in my head-
-Life is awfully fun.
especially the first stanza-strikingly poinient. I love it, keep up the brilliance! ! -landrey
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The first stanza is great, and so is the second, but it's cool how its makes you grow all turbulent - then 'life is fun'. Very surprising ending. Like it.