Treasure Island

dr.Neha gupta the POEMLOVER

(28 july 1989 / india)

Betrayd! ! !

It hurts me everytime
Why did u left me
In my bad times
U promised me to walk together
U promised me to be dere
Why did u left my finger
Made me fell
I kept watching u
Bt u nvr cm back
Still i pray for you
A day u came
It was like dreaming
Ur touch made me realise
It was my real world
Few days passed
It was my own world of happiness
I was cmpletly lost
I nvr imagind d day which came
Each sec i begg u to stay
After a time i got it back
I trustd blindly
Dat u will b back
Each min i was counting
As min passes makes me happy n crazy
Finally d day came
I was smiling whole nite
When i got d answer
I was betrayd
I was unable to bekieve to listen
I was trusting my trust
I kept waiting
I kept counting
Bt no one came back
Evry sec i was dyng
Evry sec i was tryng
Bt no one undrstd what it made me
M loosing myself
My happines was snatched
My evry word was made fun
my sleep my thirst my hynger nthng i feel
What i feel is only my loneliness.
Still i feel pain
Still it make me bleed
Cant b heeld

Submitted: Sunday, April 07, 2013
Edited: Thursday, October 10, 2013
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