Better Letter... Poem by lindsey goodman
Better Letter...
i wish that you
would just stop
my fears are way too true.
i am one of the
ones that really does care
all i want you to
know is that i'll always be there
whenever you need me.
i am a true friend
and i will be here
till the very end.
i love and
care about you
it kills me to
see you do what you do.
you need to understand
i want you to get better
and that is why
im writing this letter.
this isn't the way to solve
your problems it only makes them worse
this thing... its just a
like a horrible curse.
its like crashing
in a car
it only takes one bad move
to create a bad scar.
mentally and physically
it wont just go away
it heals and it scabs
with every passing day.
i hope that you
will listen to me
i just cant
set you free...
not like this...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/27/2024 8:56:30 AM # 1.0.0.1119
I was impressed that she said this was a letter. So it is. It is lined up, however, as a poem. I wish people wouldn't do that, but they do. I don't mark down for it normally. I won't do it here, certainly. But I found this piece wanting in several ways. Mostly in the presentation of the content. This was a difficult challenge. It should not be underestimated. So, I'll give it an 8. GW62