Between Odds Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Between Odds

Rating: 4.1


Some thoughts are still struggling to take off
Some doors are yet to find the keys
There are few a unanswered questions
And some answers for which questions are not found.

The jigsaw puzzle this life throws at us
Some pieces remain mystery yet
They appear in flashes like a rainbow
Leaving trails of misses and catches.

They are not living their dreams
since clouds of fear surround everywhere
the sunrays struggle, to pierce dark fears
emotions kept in check, to rise with the waves.

Thought echoes back probing questions
Answers yet far from reach
Among them, we live life enjoying
True game of luck against hard work.

Wednesday, November 25, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life,love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
T Rajan Evol 26 November 2015

This odd is very enjoyable and challenging, liked it Asim God bless u.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 November 2015

Sometimes thoughts struggle for more time but we need to feel these living with dreams in interesting vision. Wise poem shared.10

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Kelly Kurt 25 November 2015

Through age and experience comes wisdom. My most profound experience with this, is that I realize now that I know nothing. That does not keep me from asking questions and seeking answers. But life does not give these up Thanks, Mohammed

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B.m. Biswas 25 November 2015

there is an answer of the question...how this poetry is? ...ans..excellent.....thanks..

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