Between You And Sports Poem by Maria Jose Cid Velazquez

Between You And Sports

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Skating is the lost dream
that I once had
the one that was never with you
but always in my mind.

Swimming is to come back to the past
the moment where I first met you
that's why to be in water
means to see you by my side.

So I remember the water
with fresh splashes
and the wonderful sight of you
swimming along the pool.

Then I'll go
deep under the sea
and go over a great slope
to skate through my dreams
and be under the water to refresh my soul
walking always along streams

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gil Cordoba 04 September 2007

AHHH PUES EL POEMA ES GENIAL, SE PODRIA DECIR QUE ES FANTASTICA, ME DEJO ALGO IMPRESIONADO Y SORPENDIDO Y MAS PORQUE EL POEMA SE ENFOCA MUCHO A ALGO YA SUCEDIO, JEJEJE, APARTE CREO QUE EL NOMBRE DE LA POETISA ME ES MUY SONADO, CREO CONOCERLA Y MAS DE LO QUE PIENSAN, AUN ASI MARIA JOSE CID VELAZQUES ES GENIAL, GRAX POR ESCRIBIR TAN BONITO POEMA

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