Beyond The Barrier Poem by Sandra Fowler

Beyond The Barrier

Rating: 4.9


If this became the last day of the world,
The sun and moon and stars mosiac hurled
Beyond the barrier of time and space
While we stand locked together face to face

What would we see behind the barbed wire
Dividing earth and water, air and fire,
Who look no farther than each other's eyes
Where even hell admits of no surprise?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duncan Wyllie 05 September 2006

This is very strong writing, leaves us admiring your talent Thankyou for sharing this Love duncan X

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Nimal Dunuhinga 05 September 2006

At the world's end towards the doomsday souls are hand-in-hand but still longing for unborn tomorrow? This is a wonderful poem Sandra.

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Patrick Ladbrooke 10 October 2006

Selected at random, and wow! what a terrific poem. If random sampling always throws up these gems, what a consistent and accomplished writer this indicates. Patrick

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Will Barber 17 November 2006

A very moving testimony to our need to overcome barriers, Sandra. This poem moved me very much. We should all consider what we want our legacy to be - division or union. You unite the world in many ways. I admired this very much.

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gone gone 21 November 2006

Hi Sandra a wonderful poem......no ifs about that.....thankyou Love, D.

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Nikunj Sharma 21 November 2009

this is amazing write..........the depth of your meaning capsizes the reader...keeps him hooked...........wow is the word

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Sarwar Chowdhury 30 August 2009

Astonishing imageries! heart crunching this poem i loved dear sandra! excellent! 10+

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premji premji 13 June 2009

what a poem........ absolute love................ i feel that warmth............... i hear those heartbeats....... you will vanish, but your words will never...............

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Tsira Goge 14 November 2008

It was pleasant to me awfully... Very strong poems...10...... Thank you, Sandra.......... Best wishes, Tsira

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A poem of high inspiration and profound strength. I enjoyed it. (10/10) Joseph Josephides - Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Intern.Library of Poetry awarded

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W. Columbia, WV, USA
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