Concetta Neville

(August,13,1988 / Coral Springs FL.)

Birthday Wish


This is what I long for;
The moments when you're near.
I hear a knock upon the door,
And go to see who's there.

On the other side you stand.
My palms begin to sweat.
Never have I met a man
Who makes me lose my breath.

I open up the door real slow.
I see your smiling face.
Outside it is very cold.
I let you in my place.

You wish me happy birthday,
Than you kiss my blushing cheek.
I feel my body shaking,
And my legs are going weak.

A friend is what you've always been,
But slowly I have found,
Only when you're near there's bliss,
And when you're not I frown.

My parents aren't home right now.
Its only me and you.
I feel I'm walking on a cloud,
but don't know what to do.

I start to look around my place.
Afraid that you might see,
see this look upon my face.
My love for you, it screams.

But then I feel a burning warmth.
Your hand upon my cheek.
I look to you, my thoughts they swarm.
My legs are getting weak.

You look at me as if to ask,
to ask if it's okay.
Talking seems too hard a task.
I nod and you obey.

Your lips descend upon my own.
So warm, so soft, so right.
The greatest birthday I have known.
You made my wish come true this night.

Submitted: Sunday, July 20, 2014

Topic(s): Love


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  • Khairul Ahsan (7/21/2014 2:14:00 PM)

    This is the first of your poems that I've read, and I've liked it. The poem honestly describes the feelings of a 'wish come true'. (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (7/21/2014 2:14:00 PM)

    This is the first of your poems that I've read, and I've liked it. The poem honestly describes the feelings of a 'wish come true'. (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (7/21/2014 1:14:00 PM)

    This is the first of your poems that I've read, and I've liked it. The poem honestly describes the feelings of a 'wish come true'. (Report) Reply

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