Bits Of Poem Poem by Kanchan Dubey

Bits Of Poem

Rating: 4.5


What is this poem,
But merely bits of my heart and soul
Make me forget of all the pain I hold
I put my heart on the line
It has managed to fail me
What can I do but numb it alive
Suffering is what I call only mine
Is this my future
Or is it my life

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tom J. Mariani 22 November 2007

Same as my comments on your poem 'A Cold November.' I would only add Sandra M. Gilbert's collection of poems, 'ghost volcano' where she writes about the unexpected death of her husband. Keep working on your craft and I think you will find that you can add to the bits of your heart and soul in future poems. Tom

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