Bitten Poem by Deborah Cromer

Bitten

Rating: 5.0


I will love you forever, with no end
Taking your memory to my deathbed, with eternity to spend
Keeping you alive in my thought, you cannot die
Together always I will be happy, I will never cry

We can spend eternity together walking as one
Strong and independent like the moon and the sun
Our energy has bonded I cannot set you free
I think about you so much, do you think about me

How are you doing without me now that you are with another
Your high maintnenance glamour queen, so proud of your lifetime lover
You chose the way, you picked your future and your days
The longing I have for your touch, in my thought forever stays

I dream of you, you live in my heart, you stay in my mind
Any sadness, anger or pain, has been dismissed and left behind
I hold dear feelings for you deep within my soul
You changed me so deeply, mind and spirit, together as a whole

I live my life now and you are next to me every step I take
Comforting me while I sleep, helping me to wake

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chris Blazo 18 August 2012

Another one! Great work.

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Nikunj Sharma 10 November 2009

the flow, the ease and the simplictiy of your words, makes one wonder, how you create poems out of thin air. this one conveys so much, it has pain, anguish, realisation and a longing. its wonderful to read to your work, , , , , , , , , , Niks

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this is fine, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , good poetry

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Deborah Cromer

Deborah Cromer

Portland, Oregon
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