Black To Gold Poem by Richard Wlodarski

Black To Gold

Rating: 5.0


Trying so hard
To paint it gold
Comes out so blue
Leads to damn black

White around corner
Silver almost there
Blue returns for more
Black is now the score

Yellow shining through
Golden sun right there
Pink tarnishing black
Red now spilling blood

Sky blue coming to life
Silver blistering black
Red's bloodline breathing life
Golden sunrise now mine

Saturday, May 5, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: inspiration,mind,motivation,self,self control,self discovery
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 07 May 2018

It is like self-exploration going 360 degrees or the life of a 24 hour day. It has much to ponder upon. Thanks, Richard.

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Love your response, Rajnish!

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Poignant with with hope at the end. Thought provoking beautifully crafted write. Liked the penultimate stanza.10

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Rose Marie, I greatly appreciate your very positive response!

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