Blackened Heart Poem by Allison Unknown

Blackened Heart

Rating: 3.3


Smoke is everywhere
Deep breath
Inhale
Blow out
You smell it
It smells of death
You poison other people
Around you
Near you
You hate
You know it does no good
You dont care though
You take in another breath
Think of everyone
You're affecting
Blow out
You start to laugh
Smile on your face
You love hurting people
You don't care about them
Breath in
Breath out
It all over
You throw it away
Step on it
So it doesn't start a fire
It takes away anger
It takes away pain
Great invention
Made by men
It is
The cigarette

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i like your writing style

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Gold Fish 11 October 2009

Great description of the ill effects of second-hand cigarette smoke. The poem is cynical, sarcastic and sprinkled with irony. A nice witty poem. Thanks for sharing.

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