Why did she do this
Why did she commit suicide
Why god why
Did you have to do this
To me
She had a future
She had a life
Didn't she
I wonder
What Her
Last Thought was
Before she did it
Before she pulled
That trigger
Of the 45
wow that was pretty dark yet I enjoyed reading it because it made me think about the people around the victim not just the victim. Very well written. Good job.10 :)
I'm afraid I can't imagine what her last thought could have been, but I wish it could have been of all the people that meant something to her. She probably couldn't see them then. I liked reading this, because it reminds me of all the people I care about, and how the glorification of suicide is self-induced and short lived. But I do hope her memory lives on, if this actually happened.
She had pleaded for help long before she pulled that 45- but no one listened and the last word spoken was 'BANG! . Good write-sad we live in a world that some of us can't live in. a 10++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Her future will never be known. A beautiful wedding? A loving mother? How many children she would have? Her legacy will forever go unfulfilled. That is the saddest part. We are lucky enough to still be living. This poem was great!