Blank Minded Frustration Poem by J.R. Kelly

Blank Minded Frustration

Rating: 4.0


Buddy Holly on vinyl.
The thoughts don't want to come like they should.
He wants to hear my words
like liquid seeping out my mouth.
They should sound how they feel,
soft and playful.
Each phrase seems too restricted,
overused,
chewed up,
unoriginal.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Calico Jack 07 May 2012

This sounds like how I feel when I try to write when I'm tired, or have to write something for somebody else. Its never fun writing when you have to. I liked it, it makes you remember those moments.

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Kameron K 07 May 2012

Idk what to think about this, but I think I like it :) message me if you want to :)

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