Bleeding My Love Poem by California West

Bleeding My Love



my blood spills to the concreat floor
blood comesfrom my mouth with the screams
i scream in pain
the blood warm and red like a scarlet ocean
blood spills from my body easily
it leaves me comfortably
my hands on the cold concreate
th blood forms a puddle around me
i see the chalk outline of my body
my strength is impelling
the darkness surounding me
i am forever bleeding my love to you

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Elias Barcelona 24 May 2010

very nice. it very well detailed i can really feel the concrete keep em coming

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