Bleeding Petals Poem by Michelle Tolly

Bleeding Petals

Rating: 2.5


The deepest pits of hades,
no longer glow red.
We mourn your bleeding.
Your snow white petals,
are no longer.
They are the colot of pain and suffering.
We dont ask, you dont awnser.
The atmosphere is heavy with sorrow.
But it will be here as morrow come.
Thou does not hesitate,
to be immortal.
Thou cannot leave because
thou are no longer normal.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hannah Davies 15 February 2007

I agree a very well written peace. Some good imagery used there too. Well done x

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Pam Thomas 12 February 2007

Very well written poem Michelle. I enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing. Pam

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